tiny bugfixes 2.0 lol

hi!! turns out that the previous fix for the short bit loading into the gardens didn't work, so hopefully that's fixed this time. also changed a couple formatting bits at the end, and made the music stop playing when you hit log off, so that it's slightly more clear the game is over - i was considering making it erase the text as well, but someone mentioned they liked reading it back, and i want to encourage that experience!!

i also changed it to say dying mmo jam 2022 (instead of 2021) in the credits bc apparently i forgot what year it was when i made this

k bye thanks for reading and/or playing  <3