Swan Neck
You're the hero in all your stories.
Content/trigger warnings:
- broken arms
- accidental and implied intentional injury
- blood mention
- medical setting (hospital/ER)
- major medical trauma event mention
- implied medical malpractice
Made for Neo-Twiny Jam at exactly 500 words.
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eerie and atmospheric in just the right way - loved it!!
Every subsequent page made me more anxious. Nice!
thank u haha 💕
this was so good! loved it to bits, thank you for posting it!
Absolutely horrifying. I loved it!
oh! this made me feel sick!! five stars :]
i feel nauseous. Good job!
LMAO thank u. i love comments like this so much
i loved how you were able to fit such detailed imagery into a small word count :)
thank you!!! ^-^
is the image at the end the arm of the patient?
I think so!
dang... this person must be super obsessed with "perfect" breaks
also I looked up swan neck breaks and it does look like the arm so I think you're right
That was positively eerie--I loved how you painted the obsession with as clean a word choice as the titular break. Also, new favourite word unlocked: "serpentiform"
thank you so much!!!! yeah it's a good one haha
Terrifying. I dig it.
I like the increasingly disturbing thought process you convey about the main character. The text was nicely contrasted from the background, so that helped.
It was hard to tell which part of the text was clickable and which wasn't. I was able to figure it out from making my own Twine games.
Overall, a great submission to the jam! :) Thanks for sharing.
thank you!!! definitely appreciate the comment about the clickability of the text - it wasn't super on my mind for such a short entry, but i will think about it a lot more in future twine stuff!
this was great but i wish there were more disturbing images/interactivity you could do because the concept is super eerie but the actual gameplay was a little boring for me.